by Felonius_Monk » Mon Dec 17, 2007 4:23 pm
I have a copy of his book on my desktop; read some of it, it's interesting, though not terribly well written and there are some cringeworthy moments. But I've read far worse; not a bad attempt for a part-timer, and I presume before publishing he's had it proofread to remove some of the dodgy construction. The story itself is reasonable.
The Monkman J[c]
"Informer, you no say daddy me snow me Ill go blame,
A licky boom boom down.
Detective mon said daddy me snow me stab someone down the lane,
A licky boom boom down." - Snow, 1993